Mobile Suit Nova Gundam

[daigundam lagaan]

Hey guys, there is this one thing I'm trying to work on. In the past 7 years or so, Gundam as well as other Anime have inspired me to make my own story using that concept as well as others. Basically, it's an alternate timeline called the "Galactic Age" which means that the whole energy crisis and global war problem was solved using technology that other species from the Galaxy offered the earth. But dispute for a world leader created another war separating two halves of the earth sphere, including colonies. They wanted a world leader and a central government if they were to join the Galaxy Council, which works towards a galactic defense. There are the good guys who are called the Federal Earth Union (FEU) and the other half the antagonists called the Forces of the Earth Sphere, which eventually became the Earth Sphere Empire of Mesalla (ESEM) led by a dictator named Ricardo Mesalla who's knowledge is influential enough to get half of the Earth Sphere to join his side. In this timeline, all ethnicities are about 95% integrated with eachother, which means that the whole world is now literally almost like a melting pot. The story centers around a boy named Reeve Ora, who had a happy elementary school life until he was war orphaned at age 10. He joined his country's resistance forces after being conquered by ESEM until age 13, when he discovered the Gundam (only gundam in the story) and the FEU. The ship he travels in known as the Icarus consists of crewmembers who are under 20, because they're a special young task-force with a genious captain of age 16.

Anyway, I would like some feedback, questions, and help on this project. Thank you for not TLDR-ing it if you didn't

[ShadowCell]

um, where is the story

[daigundam lagaan]

Here's the main intro. First chapter for the prologue soon to come.

Intro:
For centuries, earth has been facing a great amount of wars and conflicts. Rarely has a decade flown by without terrorism or any kind of major act of violence. To this poor planet, true peace is a luxury too great to achieve. The causes for these constant wars were dying resources, an unstable economy, and of course, the individualism of the human being. After countless failed protests, a great number of civilians ventured out into space in hopes of finding a better world. But through this mass emigration from the earth came a new hope. Other life forms from planets that are technologically centuries ahead of the earth around the solar system and outside heard the stories of their human immigrants and decided to offer their assistance to the cursed world. Inhabitants from mars, Jupiter, and other undiscovered planets eventually came to the earth taking more than a century to renovating the earth and ending all of these conflicts. These renovations made by the Aliens solved a great number of problems by giving them resources and technology to rapidly produce more resources without cloning, giving imported cures for various sicknesses previously declared untreatable, energy coming from the sun and the resources from other planets, and overpopulation by helping the humans create air and space colonies. In time, the earths technologically caught up with their mentor planets and were taught enough about the technology to finally become independent. This started a new timeline to the Galactic Age (GA), which was inherited by the Galaxy as well. Most of the Galaxy liked our year-count, so they too decided to have 365 days as the official galactic year length. For the first century of this timeline, the earth was in a lasting peace. The stable economy and supply of resources basically ended poverty, which meant there was no more need for wars. This doesn’t however fix the problems of the individual mind. The earth and space colony leaders eventually received a message from what was called the Galactic Union, which is a union of planets such as mars and Jupiter. The only condition is that the earth had to become one Union. This created a new problem of finding the ones fit to be leader of the world. The year was 100GA , and this struggle to find a new leader resulted in more conflicts. Two sides emerged from this struggle, such as the Earth Federal Union (EFU), formed by 3 leaders who believed that it should be a shared responsibility, and the Forces of the Earth Sphere (FES), formed by a man named Ricardo Mesalla, who was praised for his intelligence and believed he could lead the world to a better future. The earth and the space colonies, which eventually became “Earth Sphere,” were eventually split up geographically, and people were given five years to chose their sides. Fortunately, people learned to accept this and knew they can bring their religious practices and cultures to a different geographical setting., while some people stayed true to their homeland as well. This also lead to the development of the neutral zones, which consist of the islands and peninsulas between the major continents and Australia. The Federation consisted of the continents from North America and South America to half of Europe and Africa, while the FES occupied the rest of the areas such as Russia, China, and every other land below. The Neutral Zones consisted of Japan, The Philippines, Korea, Taiwan, and Malaysia. It was a matter of time before Ricardo Mesalla became corrupt and committed acts of terrorism. Under his eventual rule, the FES became later known as the Earth Sphere Empire of Mesalla (ESEM). The attacks were carried out by weapons called Mobile Suits, which were humanoid machines developed for combat. It was then that the Humans figured out how to use their newfound technology to create weapons. The retaliation of the Federation gave birth to World War V. The war never progressed and was at a stalemate. Both sides conquered areas as soon as the other side did. With no end in sight, the world was back in turmoil and has so far lasted for 20 years.

[daigundam lagaan]

please excuse my writing if it's terrible. part of why I kinda need help on it