The year is the New Constellation Century, (N.C.C.) 109. Earth's main, superpowered countries are now united under one goverment known as, the World Sphere Federation. They protect their citizens from the threat of other Mobile Weapons used by Independant Countries. Any sect found possesing Mobile W...

Thanks for the heads up on the typo; and I won't bother posting trailers anymore...

TRAILER... Sitting upon the edge of a cliff with his back against a rotted tree, a young man of twenty looked out towards the snowy mountain tops with the orangey-red sun beginning to set. There was a rumble among the clouds as they started to turn dark; a few flashes of lighting illuminated them i...

Mr. Hanekoma wrote:Uh, yeah, that sounds an awful lot like 00 Season 2.

It is inspired by both Gundam 00 and Gundam Wing and I knew there would be similarities regardless. But hopefully the full story will end up being a good read nonetheless.

The year is the New Constellation Century, (N.C.C.) 109. Earth's main, superpowered countries are now united under one goverment known as, the World Sphere Federation. They protect their citizens from the threat of other Mobile Weapons used by Independant Countries. Any sect found possesing Mobile W...

The thing about prologues is that they tend to be a little overtly dramatic. I definitely had bouts of those when I first started. Strike Wing 's intro reads a little like it was written for tv, which isn't necessarily a bad thing, but you have to decide as early as you can format you're going to u...

Small Teaser Trailer: A battle takes place out on a rocky terrain. Large, bulky, dark green Mobile Suits with blood red mono-eyes are stomping about, moving behind large rock and land formations--firing machine-guns and bazookas--while brown colored, similar bulky Mobile suits with normal red mono-...

@ StrikeWing: Basically, what I've done is use Google & Wikipedia for general info involving deities & such. Depending on your themes, a heavy slant on such subject matter might curb your search. Don't forget the fun-factor, however. It's just how you use it. But, then, I'm the type that pu...

ShadowCell: I can say for certain that Omega isn't a bunch of Islamic Terrorists. Also the more I thought about their purpose and intentions in the story, the name really does fit accordingly. So I may still use it. Big B: I'll try to do some research into other more obscure myths and see what I can...

I'd like to mention that this is my first attempt at writing a Gundam fic, my other one didn't even get off the ground, but I think I got a nice story with the background planned out better then the last one. So I want to give it a shot. But that doesn't mean I don't know how to write, I've written ...

Synopsis for my Gundam fic in the works: In the year R.E., "Renaissance Era" 125, the world after being in shambles due to the Big Quake a generation ago, had finally rebuilt itself. Canada, the remnants of the United States, Britain and China formed the "Commonwealth Alliance";...

Good luck man, hope you straighten things out. I too have the same problem with stories too.. the middle is jumbled and you're trying to make it all work. But you won't know until you do it.

Can't wait to read more.

What I've read so far I've liked and hope to see more of this fic in the future.

I hope to see more of this Gundam fic of yours, it's pretty good and a few spelling errors here and there can happen, and can be fixed easily, so that's no biggy. So far I'm very interested in this story. Keep it up.

Due to my new work schedule I may have to post-pone this fic for a bit, but we'll see how things go.

Nagato21 wrote:A kingdom concept seems like an original idea; I thought about making a fic like that (I am an Escaflownes fan) but I change my mind. However I am anxious to read that fic of yours. Good luck

thanks for replying man, I'm still working on ep 1, it's coming along nicely though I think. ^__^

sent you a pm with my hotmail.

Sounds cool to me man. Can't wait to see what else you put into this one when you're done with planning.

I'm still planning some stuff out myself I have most of the big events planned, but getting there, that's taking some time. ^_^"

Cool, I will man. What's yours gonna be about?

Thanks for commenting :) Though I did place it in a setting with Kingdoms, there is still technology, ie. Mobile Suits and stuff like that. So it doesn't go too far towards the fantasy, cause how could you have Gundam without technology, right? ^__^ Hope you enjoy it when I post up Scene 1. (I'm cal...