Finally got my copy of volume 5. This is right around where I stopped Translating For Fun, so while I'd closely skimmed it (and the rest of the series), it all feels pretty new from here on in. Exciting!
Some thoughts I had, while reading:
-Wow, did Deikun ever come off differently than I imagined. I always figured that he took a much more peaceful, anti-war stance towards relations with the Federation, and that was part of the reason that Degwin had him killed - I don't know why I thought that or where I read it, but it was definitely always something I took for fact until now.
-I could have sworn that Roselucia had a line about Deikun being a college professor. Was I imagining things, or was that something lost in Vertical's translation?
-The tragedy of the Deikun kids works really well, I think. Seriously, right in the feels. I can see why this is such a popular part of the series. Poor Astraia.
-Basically everything with Ramba and co. is really great, too, and I especially love the escape scenes. It all kinda masks the fact that I still had no idea what their deal was by the end of the volume; there's this vibe of "Getting the band back together", but as what, exactly? Were they a former military unit? If so, why did they break up? I don't recall seeing a lot more of them in "To War" or "Loum", so I get the sense that I may be forever in the dark on this.
-Whoever tried to write the accents for those kids on Texas colony should really just stop.
-Bit of a minor nitpick, but it would have been nice to see some Zeon propaganda playing in the background or something. It would have shown well how omnipresent it is and would have fed well into Real Char's desire to go.
-I also didn't know that Casval left under the pretense of attending school in Loum. Not that that holds up long, but still.
-I always thought that Side 3 was called the Republic of Zeon under Deikun and the Principality under Zabi rule. I knew about it being called Munzo from what little I did translate of this volume, so I was curious about how that fit in; I guess I thought it was an alternate name, or a Federation euphemism, or something? It'll be interesting to see why the Zabis bother to shift the name again, especially considering that they're pretty much the Principality that we know and love by the time "Char" enters the Academy.
-So another Side - I don't remember which, but it might have been Loum - is referred to as an "autonomous republic". Does that mean that Zeon isn't the only independent Side in THE ORIGIN, or is this a Vertical slipup?
-I really found the writeup by Yas fascinating, and I wish we got more extras like that - some insight into the approach being taken to THE ORIGIN. It certainly beats being told how amazing Yas and THE ORIGIN are every volume; while I agree, they're basically preaching to the choir.
-Also a minor nitpick. but would it have killed Vertical to translate the manga panels in the preview section?
All in all, a great read. The dialogue has plenty of Vertical-isms throughout, but I'm largely used to those by now and they only occasionally take me out of the story. Can't wait for the next one!
Deacon Blues wrote:I'm quite interested, now that I think about it, in seeing how they render Gihren's speech in the Loum arc.
I think the thing I'm most interested in seeing them tackle is the second verse and chorus of Ai Senshi in volume 8 (and, by extension, the bit of Meguriai in the final chapter).