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by Big B
Sun Nov 28, 2010 5:31 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: Mobile Suit Gundam Deus (Complete 12/12/11)
Replies: 151
Views: 70678

Re: Mobile Suit Gundam Deus (Phase 45 11/18/10)

PHASE 46 - CITY OF GOD ------------------------------ Shanghai ------------------------------ The Rhine had been docked for about a day, and Otto had decided to let his crew take a limited time off the ship. They couldn't leave the base, but physically leaving the ship was at least something. He loo...
by Big B
Thu Nov 18, 2010 7:28 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: Mobile Suit Gundam Deus (Complete 12/12/11)
Replies: 151
Views: 70678

Re: Mobile Suit Gundam Deus (Phase 44 10/31/10)

PHASE 45 - IN THE WAKE OF WRATH --------------------------------- F.E. 109 --------------------------------- A prison guard held a tray full of a freshly prepared meal. He could smell the succulent steak and the generous sides of potatoes, chili among other less potent items. He backed up as another...
by Big B
Sun Nov 14, 2010 5:55 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: Scarlet Raven - Original Mecha Story
Replies: 6
Views: 3720

Re: Scarlet Raven - Original Mecha Story

One thing that can help catch grammar and spelling errors would be to run it through a spell checker, which is usually enabled on a word processor like Microsoft Word or Corel Word Perfect.
by Big B
Wed Nov 03, 2010 4:18 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: General Fan Fiction Discussion
Replies: 533
Views: 123492

Re: General Fan Fiction Discussion

personally, having to write up specs for mecha tire me out and is really annoying, which is why my fanfic only has 2 mecha specs and at least 4 or 5 models of machines. big b, from whom i took much inspiration... damn it, im really lazy :S I like using specs mainly to help both myself and readers k...
by Big B
Sun Oct 31, 2010 6:55 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: Mobile Suit Gundam Deus (Complete 12/12/11)
Replies: 151
Views: 70678

Re: Mobile Suit Gundam Deus (Phase 44 10/31/10)

It was that or a colony drop. ;D The FE calendar doesn't have a lot of colonies to be chucking at the planet at this stage.

Actually, I've had the Prometheus system idea in my head for a long time.
by Big B
Sun Oct 31, 2010 5:48 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: Mobile Suit Gundam Deus (Complete 12/12/11)
Replies: 151
Views: 70678

Re: Mobile Suit Gundam Deus (Phase 42 9/5/10)

PHASE 44 - FIRE FROM HEAVEN --------------------------------- Elena lay in bed, arms crossed. She had been staring, quite often really, at the wall past her feet. The doctor had ordered bed rest and clear liquids for two days, something she wasn't in the mood for right now. She wasn't tired either, ...
by Big B
Wed Oct 20, 2010 5:38 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: Scarlet Raven - Original Mecha Story
Replies: 6
Views: 3720

Re: Scarlet Raven - Original Mecha Story

Hmm... I get the basic premise of what's happening, and there's not a lot of glaring spelling/punctuation issues. However, the scraps of detail desperately need a good deal of fleshing out. It doesn't need to be an information dump, but this world your presenting is highly vague at best and doesn't ...
by Big B
Sun Oct 17, 2010 11:31 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: Mobile Suit Gundam Deus (Complete 12/12/11)
Replies: 151
Views: 70678

Re: Mobile Suit Gundam Deus (Phase 42 9/5/10)

Current update: nothing new to post. It's in the works, but pretty much, real life has come into play, and I haven't had much time to invest in this lately. It will be done, but not likely this year.
by Big B
Tue Oct 05, 2010 9:26 am
Forum: Anime and Manga
Topic: having a hard time understanding Neon Genesis Evangelion.
Replies: 41
Views: 10647

Re: having a hard time understanding Neon Genesis Evangelion.

Yeah, Eva can't be grasped in one single viewing. It and RahXephon are two series that I find new things throughout everytime I rewatch them.
by Big B
Sun Sep 26, 2010 9:13 am
Forum: Anime and Manga
Topic: What's Your Current Anime? Mk II
Replies: 582
Views: 114455

Re: What's Your Current Anime? Mk II

Watching Zeta Gundam. My tastes have changed or I've grown to appreciate works and overlook/not care so much anymore the dubbing. I previous thought that Kamille was an utter dick in the series, but now, I think he's brash and strong-willed, rather than simply being a turd. I also think having a bet...
by Big B
Wed Sep 22, 2010 3:38 pm
Forum: Anime and Manga
Topic: Just Finished V Gundam... Awesome SPOILERS AHEAD
Replies: 40
Views: 9549

Re: Just Finished V Gundam... Awesome SPOILERS AHEAD

One thing that bothered me was Katejina's flip from LM to Zanscare. You see her in a situation that she might've been used for some "fun" by some Zanscare pilots until Chronicle intervenes, and the next, she's changed over to Zanscare and is toying with Uso. I don't think the transition wa...
by Big B
Tue Sep 21, 2010 11:35 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: Mobile Suit Gundam Deus (Complete 12/12/11)
Replies: 151
Views: 70678

Re: Mobile Suit Gundam Deus (Phase 42 9/5/10)

Pagan was inspired by Rau LeCruset, just an FYI.
by Big B
Sun Sep 05, 2010 11:03 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: Mobile Suit Gundam Deus (Complete 12/12/11)
Replies: 151
Views: 70678

Re: Mobile Suit Gundam Deus (Phase 42 8/12/10)

PHASE 43 - THE MAKER'S SHADOW ------------------------------------- Alarms blared inside the Victory. Everyone onboard had felt the blast rumble through the ship. While an actual panic hadn't broken out, a number of crewmembers were certainly in shock. It was a wonder the ship hadn't dropped from th...
by Big B
Sat Aug 21, 2010 9:21 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: Mobile Suit Gundam Deus (Complete 12/12/11)
Replies: 151
Views: 70678

Re: Mobile Suit Gundam Deus (Phase 42 8/12/10)

Hi there! Been reading the first few chapters. You have a very basic style, concentrating more on conversations than on the surroundings or how the POV character is feeling. If you were attempting to turn professional, I would be tearing it apart, but for fanfiction I'm more lenient since your gram...
by Big B
Thu Aug 19, 2010 3:29 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: General Fan Fiction Discussion
Replies: 533
Views: 123492

Re: General Fan Fiction Discussion

Possibly. I've started to entertain the thought, despite previously stating I probably wouldn't, of a SEED fic. I still have a lot of work before it's even a remote possibility, but the main character is gung-ho on war and when he's legally able to enlist, he does. He's a natural living in Orb. He'l...
by Big B
Wed Aug 18, 2010 12:13 pm
Forum: Anime and Manga
Topic: Is there a Gundam series that is "your" Gundam?
Replies: 59
Views: 13420

Re: Is there a Gundam series that is "your" Gundam?

I was introduced to Wing, but never really got into it the way some have. SEED, despite the angsty crying that happens throughout, is the series that got me into Gundam.
by Big B
Wed Aug 18, 2010 10:27 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: Mobile Suit Gundam Deus (Complete 12/12/11)
Replies: 151
Views: 70678

Re: Mobile Suit Gundam Deus (Phase 42 8/12/10)

Heh, so far so good I guess then. :mrgreen: *knock on wood*
by Big B
Mon Aug 16, 2010 3:37 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: Mobile Suit Gundam Deus (Complete 12/12/11)
Replies: 151
Views: 70678

Re: Mobile Suit Gundam Deus (Phase 42 8/12/10)

Things are starting to wrap up, so if there's any major plot points that need to be addressed and don't seem to be getting there, give me a heads up.
by Big B
Sat Aug 14, 2010 9:49 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: Mobile Suit Gundam Deus (Complete 12/12/11)
Replies: 151
Views: 70678

Re: Mobile Suit Gundam Deus (Phase 42 8/12/10)

Hey, after about three years, I finally updated the timeline to the current situation.
by Big B
Thu Aug 12, 2010 8:44 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: Mobile Suit Gundam Deus (Complete 12/12/11)
Replies: 151
Views: 70678

Re: Mobile Suit Gundam Deus (Phase 41 8/3/10)

PHASE 42 - AMONG SIMPLE MEN --------------------------------- In her bed, Alice, half-asleep rolled to one side. There was something she was going to get up to do, but she could remember what it was and she fell back to sleep. The next time she opened her eyes, she saw the clock and sat up, alarmed....