But that said, on the whole, I enjoyed the crap outta this fanfic, all of them, everything you've written. And no matter who may criticize about "grimdark" that and "Victory rip-off" this, no one can or should deny your writing ability and talent. I eagerly await whatever you wr...

Maybe now the haters are gonna stop hatin', what with the After War ending you managed to pull off.

*does the slowest of slow claps for this 150-and-more-chapters epic* Bravo.

I don't know, come up with a solution to the Coordinators' breeding problem?

Enough genetic modification and the barrier between Coordinators and Naturals would be gone, and the moderates would have essentially "killed off" all the Coordinators in a few decades or so.

Had this idea for a post-DESTINY CE series in my head... even had a few chapters and a synopsis all planned out. Basically, we have a moderate faction of the Blue Cosmos (if you want the analogy, the BC extremists = Master Asia; the BC moderates = Domon Kasshu) slowly gaining support in the Earth Sp...

Could it be a medley of several different songs or an arrange of an existing one?

So I was playing SD Gundam G-Generation F, and I wondered what the "Enemy Phase" music was during the Victory Gundam stages. It sounds really serene, sweeping, and totally not the type of music you want to hear when the Zanscares are throwing themselves at your heavily customized original ...

*facedesks repeatedly* I just waded through the crap that is an unpleasable reviewer. So I post links to my story and ask the question (and this is basically the point), "how do I make this story better"? And then some schmuck has to walk in and say (and I quote) "This was a badly wri...

General story-related question: how do you give a very good hook to your story without actually spoiling most of the important details in the plot?

Well, yeah. But then again, we could also make the argument for her being the female counterpart of Bian Zoldark. I mean, look at Valsione and Lamia.

Doesn't it trouble you that the biggest critics are often the ones with little to no positive contribution to your stories as possible?

And when you do ask for help about some element in your story, they are conspicuously... absent.

Turn-A pulled off both local focus and world-changing story well enough, didn't it? (It also had the Turn-A as a glorified grunt for a good chunk of the story, too.) Going back to the makers, this just means a series that has multiple demographic appeal can be done, if your director and writing staf...

Sort of like Turn-A Gundam, if you think about it - fans are either turned off by the 'stache or bear with it and find out it's more than just pew pew lazors and giant robots slugging it out. Okay, this might come out of left field, but why do Occidental Gundam fans prefer the more "grunt-focus...

How do you do power-balancing when making a crossover story without massively gimping one side?

I've been trying to balance one side versus the other out, and it's getting to be rather frustrating.

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yes, this is still the Naruto x Nanoha fic I'm talking about

Soma Taozi wrote:What the frak is /m/?

4chan's /m/echa board.

The only reason for depicting Kira to be an unstoppable juggernaut in a Mobile Suit is to build him up all the way to the near end...

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...where he'll finally get what's coming to him.

You should also be careful not to step into the more rabid forms of feminist thinking and ideology when writing your fic...

Thanks. Well... I've got this work done (part 1 is finished, thank goodness) that involves the crossing over of two (and maybe more) series. One is your generic shonen action series, while the other is your generic magical girl ser- wait, her costume's color scheme is like a Gundam, and was that a g...

Would it be alright to make a topic where people can ask for help about (un)finished work and how to write better?

It can be a topic to recruit beta-readers for their work, as well.

I don't know. The Zanscare suits looked exotic and more Imperial Stormtrooper-like to me, and the ships with wheels were rather... I don't know, inspired. And Victory did something that SEED Destiny didn't: Usso and Shakti's blind idealism was gone by series' end. Can't say that with a straight face...

Not saying that your DESTINY rewrite is good OR bad, but I think it serves as a piece to a more coherent whole (hence the sidestories, TWILIGHT and the upcoming ETERNITY). Never mind the hostility and anger overshadowing artistic judgment - most of it directed towards the canon developments after ep...